New Sig - CnC Please :)

[Alteranz]

Made a new signature, not too sure about this one, but any advice would be appreciated
EDIT: Worked on it a bit more after the feedback

Original Signature:

 

[-jake-]

nice maybe abit more colour.

 

[Alteranz]

nice maybe abit more colour.

Do you think you could elaborate slightly more? Like what colors and whereabouts you think they should be injected?

 

[NaughtyGFX]

the lightning looks kinda awkward.
Also, I see a border at the top but not at the bottom?
And you can see some c4d partials on her face. And the Z is faded too much.
I focused on the negative parts only.

 

[squidge]

eww remove those lines and remove c4d from face.

text is decent i suppose

better than your usual anyway

 

[Kadaj]

I don't think the focal point stands out as much as it should do. It looks like you have decreased the opacity?

 

[Kiabin]

The scan lines take me away from the focal completely. I like the lightsource, cloud stock, and the text a lot.

 

[Alteranz]

The scan lines take me away from the focal completely. I like the lightsource, cloud stock, and the text a lot.

I took yours and the other members feedback into account and made a few changes, whadya think? =]

 

[NaughtyGFX]

Looks better, but imo the head is just too big.
I like the space part on the left, but there still is some of the image over her face. (left side) Erase that.
Text looks good, there still are some scanlines, but they look good at low opacity!
Maybe add a border which is thicker at the top and bottom.
~Naughty

 

[ioioio175]

i definately like the new one better than the old one...good work