New Raining CoD Tag

[SoTc]

Hey guys i made this new raining call of duty tag which i spent very little time on (i mean very little!), i just wanted some feedback on if you like the rain. I know a lot could be added but this was just a little test.

TAG is in sig

 

[T R 1 B A L]

It's very plain, there's no effect or lighting, the flow's alright, but there's a huge gap of negative space on the right, and generally you really could have done more.

Keep going.

 

[SoTc]

Yes thanks for the crit. I know i need to add more effect and add to the negative space. I had little time to work on this yesterday, i will make a new one soon.