Gift for a friend.

You've improved so much. I love the style you've done. The white rectangle sort of bothers me. It just seems a bit big. Other than that, great use of effects.

 

Thanks mate

 

I'm not a fan of glob effects, and frankly the lines don't add to the composition. They just look a little weird. For the subsection to look effective, the background colour of "SYRINGE" should be the same as the glob c4d colour.

Your execution is pretty nifty these days (apart from the odd oversharpening), it's just the composition that needs work on it

 

I don't agree at all with the whitebox, as the others said. I would have blended the text with the rest.

 

That looks awesome mate.

I'm looking forward to see more work from you.

Good job.

 

I'm a sucker for glowy effects like that, looking good my man. I think the globes go with the overall smooth look of the piece, but yeah not sure about the lines. Keep it up