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  1. Unread #1 - Aug 19, 2008 at 1:27 PM
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    Well, It's been a while since I've opened photoshop, and I hope some tutorials I've read have helped me. This took me about half an hour, so tell me what you think, etc. I was originally gonna go black and white, but it's not really my thing. Also I tried to go for Darker pinks in most of it. Again, I tried to go for that basic look.

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    You should have Jessica be brighter.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Aug 19, 2008 at 3:18 PM
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    Let's see, the render looks blurry. With the render being black and white, it does not fit the pink/purple theme. I particularly don't like how the brush overlaps onto Jessica's shoulder and hair. You could however, remove all the purple/pink stuff and work with that render and background. Maybe add some kind of nice background via a c4d or something. A border would make it look nice but it doesn't really need it; that depending on your final outcome. I would also look for a better font and use a bigger font size. Hope that helped a little.
     
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    The render you used is slightly grainy and ruins the sharpness that a focal point should maintain. It may have been a little better if you had decreased the size of your render a little and made it more central.
     
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    I think it's supposed to be like that. Perhaps not, but I think it's sepia, or supposed to look like an old photo.

    I like the transparency effect, but I think the text is:

    A.) Mispositioned.
    B.) The wrong color.
    C.) The wrong font.

    Nonetheless, as I said, I like the transparency effect. You should submit it to NSOTW!
     
  11. Unread #6 - Aug 19, 2008 at 3:35 PM
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    The render is blurry and you covered it up with pick. Try reading some tutorials on blending renders into the background.
     
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    You defiantly need a new render and brushing over the edge of the render was a mistake.
    Is this all on just one layer?
     
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    ow ow.... shes hot... lol its an ok sig
     
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    Look at Billy's Sig, The render is very bright, like it should be and looks quite nice, in your case it looks very low quality, Nice Try
     
  19. Unread #10 - Aug 20, 2008 at 10:32 AM
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    Agreed.

    P>S: And she looks kind of blurry.

    Other than that it should look Splendid.
     
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    Looks good.
     
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    That looks pretty decent imo, but I don't do alot of photoshp sorta stuff.

    I don't like overlap on her shoulder, but other than that it's good.
     
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    son, anything with Jessica Alba looks perfect for me..
     
  27. Unread #14 - Aug 21, 2008 at 6:08 AM
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    pretty good, idk much about ps i usually use gimp because ps i messed up for me lol
    i dont really have anything much more to tell you than waht previous people have said
    its not bad tho :)
     
  29. Unread #15 - Aug 21, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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    She's realy pretty :O
     
  31. Unread #16 - Aug 21, 2008 at 1:02 PM
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    If the render is old-fasion looking, the whole signature should be that way too. The signature should be based on the render, or vice-versa.
     
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