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   Lefty RC Active Member

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   thanks

    

   Lefty RC, Oct 19, 2010

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   oblivion9032 Guru

   

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   very good poem! the only thing i would change would be to change different to differ and change fait to fate

    

   oblivion9032, Oct 20, 2010

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   Weasel2013 Easy like Sunday morning...

   

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   Fait = Fate
   Differnt= Different
   cacoon = cocoon
   defyer = def
   
   
   Make the above spelling corrections, and your poem looks great! :laugh:

    

   Weasel2013, Oct 20, 2010

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   Lefty RC Active Member

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   Lefty RC, Oct 20, 2010

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