I think this is good It has a colourful, and a nice easy to read 3C text which has a "staged" effect (multiple letters behind) with lighting. The swirls add a nice effect too.
Hey man, not too shabby for not doing it in awhile, but the only that i really don't like is the purple going through your text. Other then that yeah it looks awesome
Sorry to say it but the swirls really don't look good. The text is nicely done and has some potential, but maybe would look even better with some reflections. Add some c4d light effects over the text and see how that looks.
yeah first time i did the swirls so i do admirt they look crap but i just did some stuff in ps6 so make the background before and i forgot all about it and just did any colour in the text.