My Turn..

So after previous sigs of mine. I haven't gotten alot of feedback i decided to follow some tutorials for a while before i try and make one from scratch

So i created this:



From the following tutorial:
http://www.sigtutorials.com/tutorials/basics/liquify-tool.html

V2

All Feedback is appreciated

 

Dude that's a really sick sig it took me a while to see what it was though if that means anything to you

 

Thanks
Every bit of feedback matters to me glad you like it.

 

It's good. But that piece of text made it look ugly.

 

The array of lines leading out in all directions (I'm just assuming it's a c4d) fucks up the flow.
Text could be improved drastically - it needs to blend in more with the rest of the piece.

 

Made V2, Took text and C4D out.

Thanks

 

Looks considerably better
Now you need to work on creating a bit more depth - sharpening the foreground and blurring the areas that would in reality be further back.

 

Well the lighting kinda of mess's up the fact that you cant see the focal, the little smudgy line on the left is also out of place and you need text, the lighting needs the most improved though since i barely see anything.

 

not bad, seen that tut done million times though =[
sharpen some more and make brighter lighting.