my scammer poem

i wrote this after i got scammed so it might be a little violent.:nuts:







why must you scamm me
oh scammer oh scammer
you need a swift wacking with the ban hammer

i put my trust in you and you give me nothing in return
where you will end up is a place you shall eternally burn

oh scammer oh scammer i wish i could find where you were
so i could skin you and my wall i could hang your fur

putting trust in people like you
was like Hitlers idea to do with the Jews
i hope you go to prison and meet a big black guy named Lou
with mister t watching saying "i pitty the foo"


so to all the scammers out there
karma will come and take you too where you belong, Shelob's lair.
you will be stuck crying out "this is'nt fair"

 

If you're passionate about poem creation, i'd highly suggest running spellcheck over it before posting it.

A valiant attempt none the less.

 

*snifffle* its beautiful

 

How old are you?

 

This^

Also, this should be in the spam forum.

 

Was hard to read as you suck at spelling but not a bad attempt.

 

Plaes tak inglish 101 b4 psotnig

 

this was cyoot

 

i edited it. and im 16 =D

 

Edit it more. Use MS word and try to see if your poem can fit an accepted Meter-Rhyme scheme, cause you are failing right now. Wikipedia is your friend. Use it.

 

That's not funny. Give the guy a break. I thought it was pretty good, especially the first 5 lines.

Good job.

 

For everybody flaming the guy - you guys suck.

I thought this was pretty fucking hilarious, and a very interesting/creative way to vent your anger instead of just making a thread whining Props to you man, you gave me a good laugh!