What do you think?

Hey,

So like i said in my previous thread, i got photoshop back draucia helped me get photoshop cs5. I have been using it and its awesome.
This is what i have created so far.



Just updated it to make the sides less empty, tell me what you think.




All Feedback is appreciated

 

A bit plain for my liking

 

You need to work on your colour.

 

Could you be abit more specific please?

thanks

 

the lightning is ugly no offence

 

I'm no biggie on GFX language, but I'll try to explain what I can.

The lightning doesn't look realistic. You made it look like a rainbow. As for the robot or whoever/whatever he/it is, the lines around him could be a little smoother. Background's okay I guess. But a few more effects would make it look nice.

 

Just started with Photoshop to be honest. But i used a render from Halo 3, made a background etc. Smudged up the render and added the normal render ontop. Then added the lightning to the sides with different colours to use the space provided. But thanks for the feedback

 

Well, I can understand that. Everyone starts out as a noob. Good luck.

 

The majority of the tag is monotone, which is bad in itself; you also added random streaks of colour instead of using colours that harmonize with what you've already done with the tag.

 

Thanks for the feedback. On the next signature hope everything will be much better :/. And you are right, i did put the lightning randomly :/ but again thank you.

 

Ehhh, random multicoloured pen-tooling is not good.
Lighting is actually ok, not sure what the other previous members are talking about- light source itself could be improved though- and you should isolate the focal a bit more, darken the outside edges.

 

better text please