My New Signature - Ice Sensation (C&C?)

Hey! Based on your recomendations, i did this new signature - please rate and comment about it:

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The text is positioned well enough.
The effects do seem random.
If this is one of your first 5-10 then congrats.

 

The focal should have more contrast, as you need it to match the effects a bit.

 

this is actually my 4 sig, thanks for comments

 

Text isn't working you should almost never outerglow your text.
Also the hair of the render is to different from the effects.

 

im working on that, thanks guys...

 

Ya its just the focal great bg but focal's body to blended and head way unblended

 

the fact that its not symmetryical makes it look more natural. very nice

 

well, overall it's an ok sig. thing that got me was the random c4d placement and effects.

and the focal wasn't very nice either.

But, Good job/try.