My new sig [criticism needed]

just wanted to show my new sig and hopefully get some constructive criticism. This is my first signature by the way.

 

Its aint so bad as first sig, but first of all I dont like effects :/ that purple color not compare with render/stock. Text not compares to signature too. Thats basic mistakes on this signature. I hope I helped you a little

 

shit dude for a first sig this is actually really good.

i suppose you have potential.

the text needs to be abetter font and blend in with the theme of the tag more.

also try to balance the colours a bit with gradient maps.

and read tuts.

 

Calm down on the Blur, it's pretty decent for a first try.
Don't use that text for the name, it ruins it, try and create your own, make it look more eye catching.

Final Rating - 6/10.

 

thx i didnt spend any time on the text cause i was kind of just playing around with the warp tool thanks for the criticism everyone ill try to go easy on the blurring tool

 

Not bad for a first one, things you need to fix is the blur and the text.
5/10

Also I am not a fan of the colors.

 

Text fucked up and WTF is this circle under wing??

 

if you had of read i said dont worry about th text cause i put it in in like 5 seconds just so my name would be there and the circle is from the stock photo...