My New Calligraphic logo

[Bear Clawz]

This is the one from before (I did like months ago)

After looking at it, I decided I could do something much better now

Improvement? ​

 

[XX_PLANKER_xx]

I really like the Be, & Clz. The ar and aw could use some work imo. You should upload a version of the first one with a dark grey background so its more visible. I like how the A's are the same.

I think #1 looks more professional atm. I like the path of #2 but I think maybe it could use a different brush or something.

I think theyre both good but would have different uses; #1 looks more cartoonish and #2 looks like it would suit a ski/skate/surf magazine.

 

[Mandingo]

I actually like #2, background looks really defined and white font coloring goes well, might possibly want to change the font style however

 

[Bear Clawz]

I really like the Be, & Clz. The ar and aw could use some work imo. You should upload a version of the first one with a dark grey background so its more visible. I like how the A's are the same.

I think #1 looks more professional atm. I like the path of #2 but I think maybe it could use a different brush or something.

I think theyre both good but would have different uses; #1 looks more cartoonish and #2 looks like it would suit a ski/skate/surf magazine.

SMH
Wait, you think that the old one that was drawn completely by pencil looks more professional than a japanese brush pen? ​

 

[XX_PLANKER_xx]

Yeah. The kerning is the same distance, and the heights and the serifs are uniform.