song i wrote

Ok, so today I was bored and decided to write a song , keep in mind this is my first song I ever wrote and it does not have a chorus (couldnt think of one ) i basically made it sound like it fit together (if you preceive it how i do) and have a twist in it kinda, fairly emo song but what ever i guess lol

Rate it , tell me your feelings on it insults are welcome dont really care to be honest.


today's the day, the world went away
the sky went black and our souls decayed
if anyone could see, it wouldn't be me.
nothins ever happend like this in history.
i fell through the ice
thought i'd end my life.
i felt so old thats when my body went cold,


life is the light that leads through the night
it helps us learn wrong from right
if anyone could see
it wouldnt be me
life is a dream, fake humanity
as i fell to the dark
my life couldn't light the spark
as i faded to black i had a heart attack


chaos in a dream don't mean nothing
life is now
we need to do our own things
if anyone could see
it would definitely be me
if everything was good nothing could be understood
to live through the bad
is to know whats good
for this i finally have understood
for peace in a dream
is peace in a life
and I'm thankful that she never grabed that knife