My first tag

[MrLuckyDraw]

CnC

It's not very good. But I'd like to get better. What do you guys think?

I found tag making to be 100x harder than 3d signature making.

 

[Imagine]

tag making and 3d signature making are completely different. Unless your 3d signatures are VERY elaborate, they don't require much creativity. Anyways, on to your tag.

+ render placement (At least you followed the rule of thirds )

Things to improve upon
- text (font + placement)
- flow
- too much negative space
- blending or background texture. Just too messy imo
- render cutting the seat in the background disrupts the colors and all.
- lens flare? I think you used on, I would suggest not using a stock/default flare.


That pretty much covers everything I can think of at this point.

 

[MrLuckyDraw]

tag making and 3d signature making are completely different. Unless your 3d signatures are VERY elaborate, they don't require much creativity. Anyways, on to your tag.

+ render placement (At least you followed the rule of thirds )

Things to improve upon
- text (font + placement)
- flow
- too much negative space
- blending or background texture. Just too messy imo
- render cutting the seat in the background disrupts the colors and all.
- lens flare? I think you used on, I would suggest not using a stock/default flare.


That pretty much covers everything I can think of at this point.

really helpful. thanks

 

[Azemelie]

Looks very sweet

 

[kovan]

Is this your very first sig?.. if so,, then this is VERY good for your first sig
Well what else can i say that hasn't been said by Imagine,,

Try to work on your render blending,, you could've cut out the chair also where she is sitting on because the color of the chair kinda messes up the rest of the sig,, everything is kinda orange,, so that gray color of the chair kinda messes that up

And yea negative space like Imagine said,, but yea just follow the tips given by Imagine and you'll be good for a while ,, and keep posting your sigs for CnC from other people,, that is probably the best tip i can give you,, listen to people's CnC,,

But for your first sig this is great! seriously,, you should have seen my first sig xD

Keep it up!

 

[joyee]

Hmm thanks for sharing this wonderful post, I really like to your thread.It is quite helpful discussion according to me, thank you so much for the impressive post......

 

[Spraynwipe]

Hmm thanks for sharing this wonderful post, I really like to your thread.It is quite helpful discussion according to me, thank you so much for the impressive post......

Infracted again.

As for the tag:
- blending
- colours
- depth
- lighting (lens flare almost never works)
- text
- empty (black) space

Are all issues. You have a good placement of the stock, but need to work on your effects, blending and lighting. Keep practicing and posting more