my first gfx in paint =]

[server guy]

ok what do you guys think of my first ever paint gfx...

C N C PLEASE

i modeled after a picture i took on my rs private server.. post if you wanna see what i started with and ill post it

 

[ThePr0jekt]

Um. Its really not good, even considering its your first, sorry.

A lot of the details are extremely out of preportion in size, including the horns on the med helm and symbol on the chainmail (what happened there???).

I'm pretty sure you tried to make it look like he was stepping towards you, it kind of just looks like he has a abnormally large and long leg. To somewhat fix that, you should add some detail in the leg to make it show as if it was bending.

The shading is really just as bad. It makes no sense where you put the reflection and shade on the metal. Its not realistic at all.

The colors dont compliment eachother at all. It seems as if theyre completely random and you used the default colors in the Paint toolbar. Example: One arm is a different color than another... with yellow shade .

Also, for some reason only some of him is outlined in black. That makes no sense, either outline all of him or none (Personally, I suggest 1px black outline).

A good backround would help make it look more realistic. It doesn't seem as if you put more than 30 minutes into this. Pixels take a extreme amount of work and time to be good. You can't rush them or you'll end up with.... this.

Don't stop pixeling, youll get better as you progress, sorry for being so harsh , but im just trying to help. I suggest you look at the pixels by this artist, they're good to look at and learn from: http://s15.invisionfree.com/misterxman/index.php?showtopic=1

Good Luck and All the Best,
Pr0

 

[server guy]

thank you very much for your critisim [cant spell lol=p] i appreciate it and ya i put about 30-35mins into this i kinda rushed on it towards the top ...

i personaly think the best part is cape =p excluding the neck part lol..

and i know its kinda bad but for my first i think its pretty good i know ill learn from my mistakes and get better as i go..

 

[x.DisasterPiece.x]

It's quite horrible.
If that's your first, you could have easily made it much more detailed if you just spent some more time.

 

[Wild*]

I like it. For a first attempt at paint, it's good. You should see the kind of crap that some people churn out.

You've paid attention to how the light hits the person, and maybe even attempted a bit of perspective.

Fair enough, compared to other pieces, it isn't brilliant. But few artists are born with natural talent, and fewer can use that talent without constantly observing things, and practising. ThePr0jekt mentioned it already, but this piece would be improved drastically if you added a background. Read a few tutorials, keep practising, and post your future works on here so we can all comment on them =)

 

[Yadkef]

9/10 Good for the first GFX you ever made , I liked the shading although be a bit more Creative don't make things just from what you see , Make it from your imagination! Maybe a dragon full helm?!

 

[mirsh]

not bad for ur first 1 looks kinda small fat and ugly though olol

 

[server guy]

lol thanks for the comments i had the original picture at like 8x and this 1 was large size or w/e so there not exactly right size lol

 

[geek_keeper]

its cute lol
looks like mario or something..
u made it look like an arcade game xD

 

[server guy]

lol thnx and ya kinsa looks like that i guess =p

 

[Cymru]

The problem is, people that do pixels on paint always (usually) are professional or expert. If there not amazing, they are really crappy. Thats why it is hard to rate this because it fits in the middle. For someone using paint and copying something its really good (you should see my paint skills (actually - No you shouldn't)).

 

[fir3 skillz]

It's nice, one bad thing- The black st0of on the chain...is it needed?

 

[server guy]

lol ill do an updated version later =p and thanks for the comments

it was freehanded so if that changes some of your minds =p

 

[NatalieF]

considering this is ur first, this is a pretty good job. i dont think i can do one as nicely as u do.. but yea, i'm sure u'll b a pro at this in no time, good luck!!