I just came out my moms vagina im tryna get some air how come all these people fucking stare? you never saw a black baby with rabbies and no time to care if im ever gonna see them agian. 3 years old and im told not to be bad but i hit the teacher when im mad and they said i have to use hooked on phonics so i go crazy and stick my head down the toliet. . 8 years old im cold cause the air condtion is on to high so i smoke and fly and i found out santa is really a homeless man that rides a beatup 1990 cheverolet. 12 years old i cooked my dad his fav dinner for father day but he never showed up but 2 days later he came and ate that shit cause i put it in the fridgerator i spit in it and he said "oh shit you so bad" . 13 years long no acutally its small cause my penis is the length of my balls . 14 my mom took me to the movies and she didnt pay for my ticket so i beat her senseless but i found out later that she wasnt my mom she was my girlfriends mom. thanks it took me a long time to do this rap and i hope you like it. The end
anyone can write words down i suppose. It was terrible. When i think of rap, i think of it going together..this one didn't at all.
That was horrible. It seemed you were trying to look more like a mockery than a rap artist. Your lines had no flow. All in all it sounded horrible.
Try putting the lines under eachother where it rhymes. If you do this, your flow should be easier to follow to. As for now, and as stated before, it's horrible.
