visible clothing

kinda rushed the mockup part lulz

url: visible.clothing

 

You can tell its rushed
You didn't bother with the lighting at all. It looks like the tags are hovering

 

the mockup is hardly the part to worry about though

 

introducing: Hover tags!

 

You should know that that is not the purpose of this piece of gfx, lol.

 

gotta innovate breh

 

Feel free to criticize the actual work instead of pointing out the obvious. In mock-ups the purpose is to show the client what it would look like in a real world example rather than looking at a flat, 2D piece. The fact that it is hovering over the background therefore is insignificant as it is only the tags itself that is important, the background isn't.

I like the rugged look of the whole piece Lucas. My only gripe with it is the fact that on the right side underlining was introduced out of the blue and does not carry over to the left hand side which kind of interferes with the continuity in the design in my opinion. It really gets pointed out where it says costs, people, impact. These three words are already isolated to create importance for them, underlining them looks silly to some degree and unnecessary. Otherwise it's a really solid monotone piece, good job.

 

is this for a client or what? tags look good tho, like the texture

 

OP do it the hand way with linocuts and make each tag badass and one of a kind.

http://www.gomediazine.com/tutorials/tutorial-block-print-design-with-derrick-castle/

http://www.gomediazine.com/tutorial...orlds-original-take-on-the-art-of-printing-2/

DO EEEEETTTTTT.

 

is for crowdsourcing 2much effort 2little payoff
EDIT: Lolok

 

i dont see any hovering u stupid fucking cunts

ily lucas

 

That's actually kinda cool. half the people couldnt re create that if they tried..