BoxWood: Style (1st)

My first signature; after reading a few tutorials this is what I came up with.

 

I like it, although it almost looks like there's no focal

 

I don't like how on the smaller pictures, the sunglasses are used as focals twice... Keep the last one the same, the middle one should be moved to the left to show a bit of the undershirt and the top one should be of his chains maybe... otherwise, very nice! Keep it up!!

Also, on the shoulder and left arm near the bottom, it doesn't look very good with the blur. I don't know if it was intentional or just remnants from rendering your pictures but it makes it look dirty...

 

I will keep these comments in mind for my next tag, thanks. ;]

 

Thank you Viper, Though it's not a render but a stock. ;]

Oh, and I like your latest Sumertime aswell, nice clean overall effect!

 

Wow.. this is actually really good for a first! Nice idea of the tiny boxes >.<
Simple background but at least you read a tutorial .

 

What is with you and tutorials? Not everything can be learned from step by steps. He has to figure some things out for himself and with your other comments about clicking random buttons, that's the usually best way to learn, as illustrated here.

 

I enjoy this style as a framing of work. If you use this style in the future, make sure to implement a logo in the lower left corner.

 

Glad you all seem to have good opinions of this piece, I'll try implementing your tips into my next work!

And SMI, Could you perhaps help me in the creation of a logo like yours? :]

 

The only thing I dislike about this signature, is how plain it is. The white background makes me feel like this sig is too plain. I do like the idea of the boxes on the side, and as VisionEx said, you do need a logo. Keep up the good work.

 

Thank you for your feedback Billyy. :]