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"The Beginning of the End" - New Track from Me

Discussion in 'Music' started by raange pur3, Dec 6, 2010.

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    Wassup, just posting my track here to get some feedback,
    before you say it, I know the mic is shit, so forgive me

    Cheers

     
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    Pretty good. ^^
    I enjoyed it.
     
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    YES MY WORDS OFF WISDOM PAID OFF. the quality off the mic ain't to bad tbh you got a mixer??
     
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    I'm loving the Australian-ness of it.

    Its like a good cross between UK Grime and US Rap, Thumbs up from me man.
     
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    thanks for the feedback, appreciate it.
     
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    It was good lyrical composition from what I could understand but it got boring after a while because of the continuous loop. Next song try putting a hook/chorus in.
     
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    Yeah, well I found the beat, and that was as long as it went for, I just started out writing some lyrics to it and wasn't really planning on recording it. But yeah I did, and that's how it turned out. It's just supposed to be a short intro track to a mixtape maybe
     
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