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  1. Unread #1 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:34 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    You know what to do.

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  3. Unread #2 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    Looks nice , you could improve the lightsource and some more effects.
     
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  5. Unread #3 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    The sudden transition to white looks weird, improved light source, stay with basic text.
     
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  7. Unread #4 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:51 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    I'll keep that in mind bizcuits. ;)
     
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    Look where the light is coming from don't just simply put a white brush in there.
     
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  11. Unread #6 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:56 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    The light is coming from the right and that's where it is...
     
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  13. Unread #7 - Sep 29, 2008 at 4:58 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    Agreed. Also, the text is not done very well

    Other than that, I like it.
     
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  15. Unread #8 - Sep 29, 2008 at 5:01 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    Well, Thankey You.
     
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  17. Unread #9 - Sep 29, 2008 at 5:39 PM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    The text is the only issue. Fix that up and you'll be all set. Placement is decent, but mainly the font & color. I would go with a dark grey instead of black for "Boxwood". Just gives it a better flow.
     
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  19. Unread #10 - Sep 30, 2008 at 10:37 AM
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    New SOTW #7 Entry.
    Thanks riipped. ;)
     
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