Mockup Try #2 (WIP)

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The swatches are the colors I am going to use through out. The pixelized look on the BG is on purpose. Opinions are highly welcome. I am trying to learn.

 

Not a huge fan of the color scheme, however if you stay consistant I'm sure it would be okay. The bottom two columns (left/center) look flat and compared to the above image.

I do believe this has large potential, and it's a good start.

I'll add more input later.

 

V2

 

better imo, but u should have some more smexyness to it idk how to explain, but dept, maybe some more transparency, texture idk. somethings mising

 

Going to add something in the negative space on the sides I think.

 

2px borders are heavenly for everything design related, unless you're working in 3d dude/beyond that dude.

Just stick with 2px borders and you'll be fine with anything.

 

you need a better header and navbar.

rule of thirds still applies, flip the background pic on clan wars and put the text on the other side.

as much as i love impact, it looks tacky, choose a diff font.

have the stupid twitter buttons under the header.

that transparent border thing behind the clan wars bit looks awesome, use that more.

why have you put a drop shadow under the text.

 

Not a fan of this...it seems very unbalanced and the content boxes are way too plain...

The font is terrible IMO..

The whole things just has a plain yet too busy type of feel, if you know what I am saying...