PureToMainRS Video #1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gr5w9HbPfzk

 

Kind of boring but not too much to be expected for a low level starting off.
The sound quality is pretty bad, Maybe get a better mic if you are serious about making this series.

You sound sad when you talk, Need to change that and be more excited about playing and maybe think about what you are going to say before you actually record it. I don't want to sit for 6-8 minutes and listen to you say.. Um.. yeah... a lot.

During the troll invasion part of the video there was no sound for a long time, Maybe add some music or do something to make it a more enjoyable.

EDIT: Maybe update your post here and tell us what the video is about? I normally don't click random links with out any information...

 

Thanks for the feedback, it's my first series and the reason I sounded sad was because I was sick. I actually wrote a script for the intro.

 

That's okay, But maybe just do a few takes of it and play it back to see how many times you stuff up a word, or say something wrong. Just so it sounds better for the audience. It's a good idea for a series, It will take you years to complete(literally). I wish you the best of luck and hope to see episode 2.

Also don't rush things, I don't think you did for episode 1, but I'm just saying that if you rush things it will sound terrible.

 

I'll take your advice for episode 3, I've already recorded #2, that will be uploaded soon.

Thanks for the constructive criticism and advice mate.

 

Too monotone. Don't be afraid to be loud create your own style and stick to it. Don't errr and ummm otherwise its a decent idea for a series and I guess I will sub just to see how you go.

 

Thanks heaps