ugly ugly text. but at least you didn't try to make a pro sig with no skills like most. for your first sig 8/10
Your text definately needs work, it's a very flat sig, with no real effects or anything. The render also needs to be included more in the sig. A good tut on text: http://globalsigalliance.com/forums...7793-texting-thylizzle.html?highlight=texting