She's So Vintage (An experiment of effects)

pretty nice bro

work on lighting and depth

also composition is a bit off and the flow is kinda weak

good in most aspects, just needs to be polished and tighted up in most areas to make it awesome

you should make the hands touch the c4d more so it looks like shes holding it

 

It's a cool experiment. I'd like to see more of the c4d on the right side, as it cuts off and leaves the right side feeling quite empty. It seems fairly flat, and it needs some depth and lighting. You could also add a Levels>Red and give it a red washed out look with blue/green shadows for a more vintage look.

 

Yes! nice good work