More! Bored Rhymes =p

I'm from Australia, the sunshine state of Queensland
I've seen some hard shit here, u can call it the G's Land
But we're just a bunch mates who dont let us be teased man
We roll up on faggots in our commodore's and Team vans
we retaliate at will, we're not afraid to kill
our crew are like level 3's, we all have our skills
from smokin weed to slangin pills
we rob a motherfucker whether it be a wallet or a money till
we have me who spits the rawest shit, u fuckin know it's ill
we do whatever it takes to earn that hundred dollar bill

but dont get me wrong, i have respect for human life
we just seek who crosses our path and make them bleed with a knife
we have 'em at our feet screamin, have him givin us a price
to leave him alone, but i've never been known to be that nice
it doesn't phase us coz now we have somethin to spit on the mic
it's fuck the law for life,
i'll make ya skull pop off like the cap of a bottle of sprite
but i won't at the moment coz i'm busy spittin on sythe
i got account's to trade and mills to merchant tonight
my boys will have to wait, go get somethin to eat that's nice
coz i have a customer, i asked him to buy and he said he might
i'll give 'em a call if he doesnt, we'll bury the fool so he can't see day light
don't blame me if you die, that's how we roll, alright?

lol, i dunno if that's good or not.. YOU tell me

thanks,

 

Ehh.. not bad, but never include jesus christ lol. Just ruins the whole danm thing.

 

yeah, top is good, but like winger said, saying jesus christ is gonna most likely piss some people off.

 

alrighty, i've edited out the jesus christ bit

 

im Christian, doesn't make me upset for the record, but yeah might make others think abit more than I

 

But all and all, very good!

 

thanks brutha