Logo v4 or so

It's not very serious - or professional, for that matter.

The 'deliver' honestly was not supposed to be a joke, but soon after I realized it's lolworthy.

Aside from that, cnc plzzzzzzzzzz

 

Other then the fact that theres alot of wasted space i like it. Although ice seen it before..

6/10 not bad



OH wait i remember

 

Something you could have done, was move the text under the focal point. It would look as if the gradient lighting was coming from there. It looks fake where it's at right now.

 

I think there is too much glow where the square is. It would look better if the square was overtop the glow, but still behind the text. The text is nice, what Font did you use? I'd rate it 6/10 Goodjob

 

This actually has a lot of potential for a simple logo. Like Kiabin said move it to the center of the glow so it looks like it's radiating. Also, if that square thing isn't made by you, scap it, as copyright will get you eventually if you go anywhere with this. But I do like the placement of it.

For improvements, lighten up the text, it blends with the background too much. Try doing one with a transparent background.