Lack of nicotine->getting pissed off->boredom->hyperactivity->GFX.

Cool pic, and blah blah blah what everyone say. My suggestion is to get rid of those rigid borders where it says pshy. Don't make it a rectangle, make it go with the rest of the picture, I don't like how it is just there =S

 

Hmm.. But would the text stand out then?

 

Eh, skin heads and Nazi signs. Not something I particularly like. It's like saying "FUCK THE JEWS" but without actually saying it. I bet if someone else had this sig. people would complain and you would ban them for it.

 

I agree.

 

Too much negative space, white outline around the render/stock, and skinsheads get you nothing......

 

Nice effect, only the bg, youve made it somewhat blurry (i dont know what you did), but maybe you could let that what is has been.
And for the render, use the smudge tool with 1-5% strength and smudge the edges of your render, it give a nice effect

An overall of 7.5/10

Greetz,
Zeboss

 

Allrite : ) And for the two of you guys. This image isn't just all about racism, it's something greater.
Edit: And no, I wouldn't ban anyone for using nazi signs in their signatures. Everyone can believe in what they want to believe in.

 

Here's what you messed up on. Crop this image just before the end of his (our right) hand. The fingers already fall into the background color as it is. This will give your image more emotion, because he will be looking forward into the dominate part of the image, rather than off into an unidentified space.

Your text is in a block, which makes no sense. Why is the block there? it has no significance in the ideals of the guy in that movie.

The border is the most significant problem in the image. You literally 'cut' his stomach with the brightness of the line at the bottom, and his head is not supposed to be that shiny, as low as the line at the top is. Try erasing those parts of the border, for a clean finish.

Add more details that are not in focus to the background, so that you can tell a deeper story.

 

Keep in mind the theme of the movie is that he ends up learning his mistakes in jail, and bringing his family out of the scene.