Feed Her Xans [Prod. by DopeStorm x Yung Zel] - Would love feedback.

Feed Her Xans [Prod. by DopeStorm x Yung Zel]

I just posted this on my Soundcloud and would love some feedback. It's got a strong Lil Pump vibe so, if you're not in to that kind of trap music, you've been warned. Just looking for some helpful feedback. Thanks guys! If you make music yourself, feel free to share it in your post, and if you want to collab, hit me up on SoundCloud.

 

It's grating, and not in a good way. The instrumental is boring. The lyrics are trash (I assume you know). Your flow is the best part of the song. Not my type of music, but if you focus on smoothing out your flow, obtaining prettier instrumentals, and introducing more variance in your flow then you could make some bangerz! Much better than I could do .

 

that sounds like something illegal