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  1. Ellusiv

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    This is my latest. Please CnC and tell me what i can improve on.

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    you need a new render :S
     
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    Not digging the border thing at the top and bottom. Render placement is a little weird too. Other than that, it's quite decent. Perhaps consider depth a little more in your next piece.
     
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    It just looks like you shoved in some noisy c4d's..Dont use noise unless you really know how to do it. Also, you've made like 8 sigs from that render, get a new one, and take out the border, and the text is the exact same as it was with the first one. Sorry to say, you havent improved at all.

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