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  1. Voda

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    Kinda a Poem not really, Just what I am feeling ATM.

    We are living an Ocean apart
    I wish I could swim to your hart
    Your Horizon is my Dusk
    we see the same moon (Your night my day)
    I want to be your Superman
    But I cant be today.

    We can drop tears
    For years, ohh the fears
    Hard to forget you eyes
    No Lies, Lots of Cries
    The Ocean!
    Its to far for both our emotion!
     
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    did you write this yourself?
     
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    Yer, its kinda sad to me.
     
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    i like it, its like love should but can't. Nice job =)
     
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    This is really good; really deep and meaningful. You should write more!
     
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    Thanks.

    Thanks, It just sotta comes to me when I think of un explainable stuff...

    Like: Chicken or Egg? What could have come first?
     
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    Nice man!! i like it.
     
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