My Poem: "Rain" and 'Dog" Syllables

Hello. Just create my new poem, and want to put my poem on Sythe.

#1
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Rain Give Us The Water. (5 Syllables)
I Hate Rain. It Ruin Our Day. (7 Syllables)
Rain Gives Dam More Water. (Syllables)

#2

My Dog Is Funny. (5 Syllables)
My Dog Always Bark To Us. (7 Syllables)
We Love Dog SO Much (5 Syllables)
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Haiku! (L)

It seems you've sacrificed words to fit the 5 syllable rule D: like "We Love Dog SO Much"

But they're fine

 

This would be better placed in the Literary Arts forum.
They're very basic and the English doesn't seem great, is English your second language?

 

Yeahh. This poem is "Haiku"!!! I learned it from my school. I have alot of poems.

 

Well, normal.
I could do better

 

I love rain .....and the the poem rain is very interesting .I think you should not hate rain rather try to enjoy the rain .....


Rain drops falling in my head,
and never knowing when it will end.
Should I run for cover,
or let another rain drop fall in my head again?
I would love to dance in the rain,
and knowing somehow it’ll help erase the pain.
Sometimes when I’m all alone,
and I see rain drops are falling outside again.
There’s happiness that I feel because rain is here once again.
Some may feels gloomy when it rains
and some just want to feel it in their hand.
But me I just love it when rain drops falls into my face.
Oh the magic that rain brings, it makes you feel unique.
It may bring you sadness, wet feeling in toes and clothes
but I just see happiness when it rains.



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