'Impenetrable'

Hey, this was my first signature in a month due to my computer being a bitch.



C&C please; it'd be much appreciated.

As for my own critique, I didn't realize at first that I didn't have any flow, nor a focal point at the time and I don't really want to go back and change that just yet.

Anyways, any advice is welcome.

EDIT: Why the hell isn't it showing up? lul