I sux at smudging

rate/hate/cnc
yea its bad imo...
but the public opinion is what matters!

 

Feedbax pweeeeze :'[

 

WOW! it looks like it can have great potential. My main suggestion is...

The focus is in the upper left corner with the lighting.. i suggest changing the lighting effects using it under her chin or so. Just saying

 

THank you for the feedback sir, i do agree with you,

 

floating head syndrome and is that text at the bottom right?
cant even read it :s just get rid of it
focal looks a tiny bit oversharpened or just LQ?
cool smudging just maybe a bit more flow in it

 

FHS does apply when there is a hand showing

Ive had this questioned for a while now, what does LQ mean? ima noob:'[

ty for your feedback

 

would be better if the girl's head was at the center, or on the left/right if you want to had some text

 

LQ = Low Quality I guess.
The text says chiraag in response to the other dude, but I would never have noticed it unless he pointed it out! I love the background though

 

yes LQ=Low quality
and its still FHS a hand doesnt really make any difference loll