Second attempt with a tutorial.

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Second attempt with a tutorial.
  1. Unread #1 - Oct 10, 2010 at 1:31 AM
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    Second attempt with a tutorial.

    Ignore whatever I had here before I edited it.

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    edit after critique from TDD:
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    Attempting the art of "flow".

    Also more crap.

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  3. Unread #2 - Oct 10, 2010 at 7:16 AM
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    Second attempt with a tutorial.

    This is just my opinion, but when creating a tag you should focus on all aspects rather than just one.

    The dots distract the focal.

    Your getting better.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Oct 10, 2010 at 12:24 PM
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    Second attempt with a tutorial.

    I'm trying not to focus on all of them for now. If I do, I feel that I'll make one giant tornado of pixels. I don't completely ignore them, though.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Oct 11, 2010 at 4:36 AM
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    Second attempt with a tutorial.

    I remember this tut! I did it a while ago.

    As I recall the dots should be more apart.
    And your light source is tooo strong.

    Is that mike hranica in your sig? I love dwr
     
  9. Unread #5 - Oct 11, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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    Second attempt with a tutorial.

    I'm still figuring out how to best use the dots.

    And my sig is of Mitch Lucker, from Suicide Silence.
     
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