New song Dead Child

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New song Dead Child
  1. Unread #1 - May 29, 2009 at 10:21 AM
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    New song Dead Child

    Dead Child in a grave
    wish me luck before i fade
    Dead child its okay
    Maybe todays not that day

    dead child in a grave
    dont let me go away

    dead child in a grave
    wish me luck before i fade
    dead child its okay
    maybe todays not that day

    dead child in a grave
    dont let me go away

    dead child dead child
    dead child dead child
    its okay



    the things i do are ment to be interpreted
    its not litterally

    this song is not about a dead child unless YOU think it is :D
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jun 1, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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    New song Dead Child

    Try writing it in a more structured fashion? It seemed too short. Also, I didn't quite get it when you said "Dead child it's okay." I know it has some sort of meaning...but its just not there for me.

    4/10
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jun 6, 2009 at 5:09 PM
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    New song Dead Child

    uhh idk didnt spend much time on it and mm idk still idont think im gonna be posting many more songs on here to many trollers...
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jun 8, 2009 at 8:45 AM
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    We're not trollers, we just have a questions, interpretations, and opinions. :laugh:
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jun 9, 2009 at 2:39 AM
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    New song Dead Child

    I agree with the above poster. It's sorta meaningless unless you feel like explaining it. It doesn't feel like the lyrics have any structure, and it kinda lacks a proper chorus. Other than that it's ok.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jun 12, 2009 at 9:34 AM
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    New song Dead Child

    At least somebody agrees with me ;) ^
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jun 18, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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    New song Dead Child

    ~I Like It It Should Be Make Longer Than Into a Song~
     
  15. Unread #8 - Jul 11, 2009 at 2:12 AM
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    New song Dead Child

    errrr can't say i'd buy the album :love:
     
  17. Unread #9 - Aug 19, 2009 at 12:17 PM
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    New song Dead Child

    lol i know a good song that my friends wrote its called cold hearted by the wonder boys!
     
  19. Unread #10 - Aug 20, 2009 at 6:07 PM
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    You should write it from a literal perspective; It's emotional you can talk about a lot.
     
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