Resume Help.

I no that its not really Homework of such, But thought it would be best placed in here as I know many of you would be able or have done this for home work.

Any way, I need help with making myself look a bit better.

MICHAEL PRIVATE

Adress: PRIVATE
Home: PRIVATE
Mobile: PRIVATE

Career Objective

My career goal is to gain employment that is challenging and to be learning
to adavne my career.

Relevant Certificates
White Care for General Construction Industry.
Certificate 1 In General Construction.
Certificate 1 in (WAS A 1ST YEAR APPRENTICE)

Personal Qualities
My most notible skill set is my ability to learn & think quickly and to cooperate patiently in a team. (Thanks deathnova)
I have respect for my self and others.


Skills Learnt on the Get Set for work Program:
Safe use of hand and power tools.
Duty of care and PPE in the workplace.
Measuring and Cutting materials to plan.
Enviromental awareness and landscaping.
Concreting/laying Bricks
Landscaping

Work history
18 Months (WAS A 1ST YEAR APPRENTICE)

Education and Training
PRIVATE School
PRIVATE Tafe
Get Set for Work

Intrests
Fishing and Football

Referees
NAME - Skill Build coordinator (Construction Traing Centre)
Ph: PRIVATE

ALSO: Spelling is probs wrong but thats what my Nana is for lol.

 

Hey mate, i don't remember exactly but it was some word program which has resume templates on it, and they look pretty good. Give it a google search if you wan't goodluck with it

 

Thanks, I have the template Kinda good I think, I just need help with some fancy words and stuff that may stick out over others.

=)))

 

That doesnt look like enough info, go see some template resumes on Publiser or google search.

I always like saying this to new employees: "My most notible skill set is my ability to learn & think quickly and to cooperate patiently in a team"
Also, advance at the start of your resume is spelt wrong.

 

Thanks, that sound so Pro =)

Also spelling is wrong as im kinda stressed about it tbh...

Lost my Job and have rent to pay.

 

Is this a resume related to architecture? I might be of some assistance when it comes to architecture, because the way you keep mentioning about "construction" in your resume makes me think of architecture, correct me if I'm wrong.

 

If you'd like, and you still need help with formatting your resume and coming up with ideas to fill it, I can send you a copy of a resume I built a while ago to apply to a bank.

 

First it might help myself and others if we knew what type of job you were trying to get. Although resumes in general are general, as in the same resume can be used for multiple jobs, a bit more details could still help.

Second, I'd agree with what others have said and take a look at what a standard resume looks like. Third, correcting your grammar and punctuation is a must, because to be honest, and not trying to be rude, it's horrible.

Lastly, don't use "fancy words" as you called them in your resume. Using a thesaurus isn't going to make you stand out, especially if the interviewer knows you probably have no clue what half the words mean.

Stick to the norm, trying to stand out is most likely going to hurt you, not help you, unless you're highly skilled in writing and have experience with doing so.

Just for starters, it's references, not referees...

 

not enough info imo add some mre of your personal qualities lik what you good at examples:

discrete
good communicaton skills
co-operate easily with others

 

You probably don't want to add your interests.