Hmm my sig didnt turn out?

It didn't turn out like i had hoped, i had a different image in my head.

 

I don't understand that one spot on it. And where is your focal?

 

Lacking a border, anyway It's alright. I like the c4d used and think you made good use of it.

 

The spot was meant to be the focal point, it just fucked up badly... I do like the main c4d.

 

I don't understand it..

Add a nice border.

Fix up your text.

 

uhm..I can't really see what it is D;

 

Border's aren't a necessity like everyone thinks. IMO, I hate borders. Stray away from text until you get a decent style down and then work towards text. It's probably the hardest thing you can do because you have to work it into the sig meaning making it have the same flow and making sure it doesn't stick out by blending it. You also have to pick a decent font and size and etc. etc.
This is something I would use as a beginning for a sig. The dot on the left is too small to use as a light source and the butterfly looking things are tacky.