OP ( Optimus Prime )

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OP ( Optimus Prime )
  1. Unread #1 - May 13, 2009 at 10:11 AM
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    CnC
     
  3. Unread #2 - May 13, 2009 at 11:16 AM
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    It's Ok, the render/stock is a bit messy and hard to make out. The lighting is good but the flows a bit off. Not bad really.
     
  5. Unread #3 - May 14, 2009 at 7:54 PM
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    me likes

    top right needs more, maybe a c4d or some very transparent texture brushing. I like the format of the text, colors are just a little too sharp for me. Maybe change the blending mode and reduce the fill for a different effect?.

    Also, the fade out from around the render does not appeal to me. maybe cover the original render with some lighting or brushes.

    8.5/10
     
  7. Unread #4 - May 14, 2009 at 8:09 PM
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    yuck, flow is all off. would have been awesome otherwise 6/10
     
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