sprite entry

This is my latest piece of work:



Used only default photoshop**.





**Render.

 

not bad, try adding few c4ds on it to get more effect. and move the text to the bottom right corner.

 

I don't believe in putting text in a corner.

 

Never move text to a corner that downgrades your work everytime you do that because it keeps you attention off the focal, only move it slightly to the corner if it interferes with your focal and/or effects.

 

Pretty neat, your background is a little bland though.

 

its ok, background is a little plain, and the boarder looks really weird

 

Thank you for that, any comment about the overall signature?

 

The sig is a little bit to big for where the sprite is located at, mostly the focal point is located in the middle and the rest is less important.

 

when i think of it, you are correct it would look much better if there wasn't as much blank space.

Thank you all for the feedback.

 

It's a little too plain. I don't like the black around the outside of it. Maybe decrease the size of that, or something.

 

There shouldn't be such a huge border in that sig. I think the pentooling could use some work on where you erased, and I think it's plain. Add in come effect c4ds and duplicate them and add a wave to them. Secondly, smudge it a bit and also you could use a couple of more gradient maps. Overall 7/10.

 

Sprites = epic win

 

plain, test is stupid, lack of good c4ds and effect