Gwen Stefani

[hm0ng]

So I was following a tutorial. It started out okay then I started getting off track and added and deleted things. It kind of hurts the eye as it is pretty bright in certain areas. Never did anything like this before so rate, hate, appreciate. Thanks.

After messing around again I ended up with this.

 

[hm0ng]

It is alright, maybe blend more or even change the opacity. Aswell, you might even suggest going with different colors next time . 5/10

I tried to make it darker but shit, my eyes were hurting, lol. I'll change things here and there and see what happens.

 

[GFXerEffects]

Ahh, I deleted my post because my signature wasn't loading, but you replied before I could post again. Sorry, but I read the description more carefully and you said, "you have never tried anything like this before" so I guess it's decent

 

[Jason_x]

Ill give it a 7/10 for your first try on something like this I only have a few tips for you.

The render could be a little more defined than it is right now because I get that Im supposed to look at her but you dont want her to almost be invisible lol.

Second add some text as you know text can actually make a sig look even better just not something too outstanding or people wont understand the focul point sorry if I wasnt any help.

 

[hm0ng]

Ill give it a 7/10 for your first try on something like this I only have a few tips for you.

The render could be a little more defined than it is right now because I get that Im supposed to look at her but you dont want her to almost be invisible lol.

Second add some text as you know text can actually make a sig look even better just not something too outstanding or people wont understand the focul point sorry if I wasnt any help.

I had text on it but I deleted it. The colors weren't right.

 

[Jason_x]

Maybe you can add a font and set it to burn and screw with the opacity should make it look a little smokey

 

[i k0 y0u i]

Nice work 8/10

 

[hm0ng]

Maybe you can add a font and set it to burn and screw with the opacity should make it look a little smokey

Thanks, I'll try that.