Gfx battle sig against Kovan

My first attempt. Not my best, but that's it for now.
Please C&C.

 

You're improving somewhat faster than I would have expected. I do see some flaws with this sig though. The text needs to be in more and lower. Somewhat on the focal a bit always helps. The bubbles to the right are a different color, in which throws off my vision and makes it somewhat of a focal. I think you should scratch those out, and possibly add a different effect. The bubbles to the left near the text are pretty good in my opinion. You should, in fact, add some lighting. It would look A LOT better. I would also recommend trying some space stocks with the setting to lighten. Oh, and always sharpen your sig. It's great looking sharp. But, if it's too sharp erase what you do think is too sharp with a soft brush. Anyways as said, it's one of your better sigs in my opinion. Just attempt to experiment more. Maybe try a desaturated version .

 

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This will help me a lot! I will post a v2 when I get home from school.

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Text needes to be in "more"? And lower in position?
I'll see about the bubble c4ds on the right .
Glad to see you posting again .
I did add lighting with a soft brush on lighten, maybe stronger? Its on the left side coming over her.
As for the sharpen, I did sharpen it, but I will do it more since you say so .
I'll post a V2, and could you tell which one's better?
Thanks a lot kiabin, glad to see your posting again .