Poems.

I didnt know where else to put this, but i just wanted a place to post this, to see if people like it,i enjoy writing very much so.
Its about a girl.
please rate 1/10

ever since i can remember.
You have always been just 3 doors down.
and without you There
i would desert this town.
Whenever i needed someone
you would always be there
Keeping My Heart For You
with that cute 'ol stare.

Secret love no longer.
'cause these days Getting stronger
with you in my arms,
no more worries that wonder.

Praying Upon an angel.
For a girl ive Always known.
Just Like A Drug
You take Away My Cold

with no one to hold me up
there was you standing tall
With a gripping hand
Making This an impossible fall.

standing outside your door in the freezing cold.
Awaiting for your forever hold.
with you in my arms the whole worlds to await.
Oh It feels so good, in this neverending state.

Thank You.please rate 1/10

 

I personally like it, 7/10. ^_^

 

Thank You Very Much=]
More people come and read and rate =]

 

I like it a lot. But to be truthful it does a lot of repetion.

Meaning that it says the same things like 4 times in different ways. Some people like that, some people do not.

Submit more! I personally love poetry (although I am into a darker form of it )

 

I likeee them ==]
write and post more.

 

its pretty good