i just wrote a battle rap

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i just wrote a battle rap
  1. Unread #1 - May 8, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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    i just wrote a battle rap

    rate.

    fuck slitting the little bitches throat
    ill motorboat this fucking grannys goat
    dope is my lyrics coke is my dearest
    steer clear of the nearest
    cop on my block
    your girlfriends top on my cock
    shootin up with my lyrics
    like its my glock, oh shock
    mother fucker ill pick your fuckin lock
    and lay a bunch of naked men
    waiting in your kitchen to fuck and dock
    oh man
    i just ran out of fucking words
    but you still cant top me
    with your moms fucking turd
    cause im more fly then a bird
    droping off from a pigeon like
    you are disturbed
    nurd
     
  3. Unread #2 - May 12, 2010 at 1:27 PM
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    i just wrote a battle rap

    3/10

    This just doesn't have flow or lyrical consistency
     
  5. Unread #3 - May 12, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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    i just wrote a battle rap

    2/10.

    There were words.
    And structure.

    No, nevermind. Just words.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jul 29, 2010 at 3:10 AM
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    i just wrote a battle rap

    You disappoint me >_<
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jul 29, 2010 at 3:13 AM
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    i just wrote a battle rap

    2/10.

    off point every line
     
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