Remix Sig Need Good Honest C&C please

well i tried to change my flow in my work i still need help choosing font and where to place it.



this is my first sig using this render





here is the remix

please guide me i really want to get decent at this


edit: i know placing this render in the center might of been a bad idea

 

This looks alot better then the first one, just pick out your text a little better.

Look around at gamerenders, maybe register so you can see how the experienced people do it and how they handle their effects and fonts.

 

It looks much better then the first, i still believe you need too use some better text, it is to fancy to look good, use a simple one like Castorgate. Good Luck With Future Work

 

thanks yes I do agree my texting is pretty bad I tried to go simple and yes I will go check other other people fonts and placement

 

The first one looks plain and dull,the second one is blurred and kinda plain too,light is off,not digging the effects.

 

explain how the second one is plain the light on the sword was meant to be that way

 

Looks like you're beginning to understand the concept of flow, which is nice. I think the colours could do with a bit of livening up on the first one, as it looks very plain. It would be great if you started to experiment with lighting. If you look around GFX forums, there's plenty of tutorials and guidance on how to use and place lighting.

 

thanks for the help I really needed it I'm trying to change my flow of work because some people say I kept following the same pattern which is not to well. So I tried something new I will make another sig in about a week