My New Calligraphic logo

This is the one from before (I did like months ago)



After looking at it, I decided I could do something much better now



Improvement? ​

 

I really like the Be, & Clz. The ar and aw could use some work imo. You should upload a version of the first one with a dark grey background so its more visible. I like how the A's are the same.

I think #1 looks more professional atm. I like the path of #2 but I think maybe it could use a different brush or something.

I think theyre both good but would have different uses; #1 looks more cartoonish and #2 looks like it would suit a ski/skate/surf magazine.

 

I actually like #2, background looks really defined and white font coloring goes well, might possibly want to change the font style however

 

SMH
Wait, you think that the old one that was drawn completely by pencil looks more professional than a japanese brush pen? ​

 

Yeah. The kerning is the same distance, and the heights and the serifs are uniform.