First Sig

Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by SomeFormOfHuman, Oct 24, 2011.

First Sig
  1. Unread #1 - Oct 24, 2011 at 9:07 PM
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    Thing's I've noticed: The highlights around the render could be slightly whiter and same with the background "effect".

    Critique away!
     
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    For one more work needs to be done. the text shouldn't stand out more then the what I'm guessing you want to be the focal (your render).

    you depth and lighting and more things like c4ds and filters like distort displace and stuff.

    but just keep practicing and look up some tutorials
     
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