Give me tips

Feel free to critique and try to offer some helpful advice,
about my following pics:
(i know my sig is bad atm i'll fix it up later)


Pic 1:


pic 2:
Edited

 

on all of them i dont really like the renders.

1st one : the barb assault needs to be more readable
2nd one : in the dung get rida all the levels except 1-30 looks kinda stupid with all of the rest

Type in the 1st one, Remove Items If Cant trust with them should be Remove Items If you Cant trust me with them

 

Thx, I went a little glow crazy XD
Keeping the "not available" in there because they will be available once get more vouches so meh..


More to come:
2nd pic:
Gonna fiddle around with the "Dungeoneering" and "Skilling" with how I rendered the glow.

Looking for more tips ;D

 

It's good stuff, I've just never been a fan of transparent layouts like these. A solid background colour would be an improvement in all honesty. And some c4d type effects if you're feeling up to the challenge. Also watch your font choice (many conflicting styles of font) and be sure to keep them readable for viewers.

 

Yea I gotta get more font styles

c4d seems insane just googled it, I will probebly take up the challenge a bit later on ^^, I never really liked solid backgrounds in threads I kinda like 3-D affects in threads.

 

I suggest not using the "dirty" fonts because it makes the piece look slightly unprofessional.

Clean, crisp fonts are much better.