First Pixels.

Constructive only please.

 

i dont get it, what did you do?

did you create those letters?

 

I did it all..

 

I like the concept, but the background you created is to sudden in the change of color, try making more colors or squiggles. I also like how you created a shadow, but try putting it under the spots where you shaded.

 

The background does not flow much at all, but I was not really aiming for that. And what do you mean but the shadow? You confused me

 

wow, my first pixels were REALY bad lmao......really good if this is your first

 

oo very cool. my only CC would be to fix the K..it looks a little gibbled.

other then that you could work on the background-although i know you didn't give 100% on it from your previous post, and could of made it better.

good job

 

The shadow I am talking about is under all your letters.

 

Decent concept. This is good for starters. Next time try a more simple text. It looks like you got a little carried away trying to make the text look cool, that it turned out a little odd and out of proportion. Also next time work on shading effects. The more shading you do the better the pixels will look.

 

Did you follow Riipped's guide for this?

 

I think it is realy good for your first, my first i tried looked like shit xD so i gave up