First "photoshop" sig.(Rate)

[Ginsued]

Ok, before this i used fireworks.
This is my first sig in photoshop so I'm looking for it to be rated and some advice and tips of course. ^_^
This is the result of a tutorial or two.

 

[paladen]

make the render alittle bit more noticeable and i just personally dont like the border lol

9-10 for a first
next time try to make it clear and not make a simpler design, get alittle bit more creative because all it looks like u did was cloud a layer then put a low opacity design over it

 

[TrustedMM]

10/10 thats pretty good

 

[Ginsued]

Actually i never even used cloud. xD
Thank you for the replies.

 

[H@$$@M]

For your first one it's really good. I think you should keep up the good work, and you'll get some money for your sigs!

 

[Solid tank]

very nice for your first one :]

 

[CrimsonFire]

well done with smudging so 7/10

 

[masterjr4]

it looks pretty cool im not a expert but if i was to buy it id give it a 9/10 =D border could do work though