DHP Website Sig for Halo 3

Plz Comment and Rate, Thanks...
First 1 is my sig on the site that I made and the 2nd one is the image of the old website Header.

ALSO CHECK OUT MY WEBSITE @ WWW.DEADHEADSPRO.COM AND RATE IT PLZ.
- Its not finished completely because im deployed right now and I have no time to work on it.

 

first 1 has no flow also work on text too much text can kill a sig also your text placement don't put text on the corners try to move it next to your focal, work on the colors of the text dont have a blue/green sig with red text
4/10

second 1 is alot better but once again work on the text also you can barely see xbox live clan other than that its good
7/10

 

thanks =d

 

Those are very nice 9/10 for both of them. Better than anything i have ever tried.

 

really like 2nd one; psp browser downgrading quality though great font, pm me it?

 

when i get on my sony i will pm you the fonts... im on my new macbook and deployed currently so yah thanks for the reviews